Short Story: Playing With Shadows

At that time of the day, it was as if the shadows were playing with it. It had certain angles when it looked threatening and eerie, and iIf you changed positions, it would look hilarious.

A view from the top right corner would make it look solitary and sad, as if it were left by it’s mess. The angle at which I view it makes the shadows long and narrow, as if it were standing on a lone desert dune watching the sun, its only companion in its soliloquy, set in the horizon.

The sadness which the shadows project on it makes me want to shed tears, but again shifting positions draws out terror in my heart for when I bring it at eye-level, it is suddenly looks imposing and dominating, as if Genghis Khan were standing right in front of me, waving his sword about.

The crushing jolt of my imagination startles me and forces me to take a few steps backward. I behold a new view from where I stand. It’s shadows fall to it’s left side, as if it were standing on a podium, forcing its audience to listen as it makes it voice heard.

The shadows work its magic on the table and makes the roughness of its surface look as if there were a sea of people shouting their support at the top of their lungs. I am instantly awed by this display of power and furtherance.

I hesitantly take a few steps closer and observe the smooth white surface of it, the rounded white surface that’s making it quite enticing. I reach into my bag and finger the meager sachet, containing the brown liquid that would amplify its smack to a fullness that would satisfy even the burliest, paunchiest of individuals.

My great craving enslaves me once again, as I grab it with a savageness that peons experience during meal time. I brutally force the flimsy sachet open and ruthlessly force the liquid onto it. I wolf down on it in less than a couple of minutes and flush it down with a glass of Gatorade.

So much for that siopao.

Inspired by a friend, who told me a story about the notorious siopao~

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26 Responses to Short Story: Playing With Shadows

  1. Pingback: Playing With Shadows at Pinoy Underground

  2. liyam says:

    hmmmm i bet this was from 7-11?lolz

  3. rina says:

    dumaan lang po. :)

  4. hambolsos says:

    Allow me to borrow a phrase from Sting that goes like, “Know no one knocked upon my door, for a thousand years or more. All made up no where to go, welcome to this one man show. Just take a seat they’re always free, no suprise no mystery. In this theatre that I call my soul,I always play the starring role.” You really needed that siopao keys. Hahaha! And i suggest you get yourself a decent blowjob too. Nyak nyak nyak. Two thumbs up keysi!!

  5. eca says:

    nagutom ako don ah…siopaoooo..awww
    reminds me of a very special friend…

  6. keysi says:

    liyam: Kowloon itoh~ hehe
    rina: thanks for dropping by~
    hambolsos: salamat~
    eca: milagrosa ka na ngayon? hehe~ may special friend ka na siopao?

  7. malmal says:

    anak ng siopao naman o.
    siomai naman sunod.
    hehe.

  8. keysi says:

    malmal: titingnan ko. ang hirap gawan ng kwento eh. :lol:

  9. fionski says:

    Nice site keysi!!! You made this?

  10. keysi says:

    fionaski: thanks for dropping by fiona. yep, i made this :)

  11. feed says:

    ahhh ito pala website mo.. asan na ung asado?

  12. jas says:

    hi kuya…..nice website…f i hav enuf tym,i’l read everthing here..Godbless!!!!its my bday on monday………gift ko ha….

  13. azi-chan says:

    mingming laman nun, nii-san!~ hahahahahahaha!

  14. keysi says:

    feed: andito! :lol: salamat sa pagpunta.
    jasper: sige greet kita. :lol:

  15. infested_overmind says:

    First time to visit the site, made a huge impression. Goodjob and keep it up KC!

  16. keysi says:

    infested_overmind: salamat po sa pagdaan. sino po ulit sila?

  17. infested_overmind says:

    Kapamilya sir… *winks* Regards sa Lean Shift peeps

  18. feed says:

    Me karugtong pa kaya ung asado?

  19. keysi says:

    feed, mukhang malabo. did you like the story?

  20. tash says:

    Thanks for dropping by. Like your writings too :)

  21. feed says:

    yep. liked it a lot. gusto kong kumain ng siopao sa tuwing nababasa ko ‘to. pero mas gusto ko na ngayon ung isang post mo… ung risks and wishes lol

  22. keysi says:

    wahehehe. ano ba feedback? kelangan ko ng feedback eh.

  23. keysi says:

    tash: thanks for the comment. :)

  24. feed says:

    ung asado gusto ko dahil nagawa mong magkwento tungkol sa isang napaka karaniwang bagay tulad nang isang siopao *takam* na parang hindi siya siopao ngunit parang ganun na rin. ang gulo koooo. I like the style. Making something special outta an everyday thing. Yung sa risks… sapol ako nun eh bwahahahahahaha ganda rin nun… parang nangyari talaga sa u. o baka nangyari nga. lol

  25. keysi says:

    feed: kasi yung future-editor ng future-novel ko, nagkwento. sabi daw, if you can write a 300-word essay on something like siopao, then you can be a good writer daw. nakow. hindi ko nga alam kung papasa to dun sa critiques nya eh. parang malabo eh. :lol: about the other artic, well, it’s supposed to be fictional. but i think you get my drift na. :lol:

  26. feed1369 says:

    well, it’s *supposed* to be :lol: it just reminds me of… harharhar

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